July 8, 2021
Annalee Evens is the last surviving member of her packs Alpha family and rather then stand strong she runs; at she did see to the safety of her remaining pack mates. Then of course she finds her vigilante Alpha mate who wants her to reject him because he doesn’t want to let her go.
I want to start by say The Girl With Lycan Blood is an imaginative story that has the potential to be a really good book. However, at this time the story needs a lot more thought and work. There needs to be a lot of editing to smooth out the story so it flows from one sentence to the next without speed bumps slowing down the works. I think my biggest issue was chapters 23 and 24, they were the same.
Sydney Marie, if you ever go back to edit and update The Girl With Lycan Blood please contact me, I would love to read the new and improved version and give it a better rating.
There was clearly not much effort put into the cover. Hmmm…Kind of the like the editing of The Girl With Lycan Blood
The blurb on Amazon starts with a teaser then the actual blurb. Honestly, I wish the author had place the blurb first. Especially since Amazon already gives everyone a sneak peak to decided if they want the book.
My back ran into the wood door as he held my arms at my side, my breath heavy and my knees weak.
“Say it.” He demanded.
I shook my head and tried to free myself from his strong hold, but I had no luck.
“I said say it!” He shouted again.
I looked him dead in the eye as his grip on my wrists tightened.
“No.” I shake my head slightly, praying he would let go.
“Anna I said-”
“I won’t reject you!”
Annalee Evens watched her pack burn to the ground after her parents, the Alpha and Luna, died in a rouge attack along with her brother and sister. The pack never truly healed, and the pain of loosing them ruined her.
She will no longer stay there in her sorrows, she is going to leave, even if that means becoming rouge. But her journey is cut short when she meets her mate, the Alpha with a temper, and with secrets. Anna will not only discover things about her mate, but dangerous aspects of herself.
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